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Michael Dunne Writes's avatar

Excellent points. It's something I look for when I'm editing and (although more difficult) when I'm writing my own stories. Thank you for sharing!

Mary Catelli's avatar

Glad you like it.

Frank's avatar

As my wife, Destroyer of Cliches, might have said, the grass is always greener in the kale smoothie.

Mary Catelli's avatar

Ah, but the shepherds have to keep the sheep out of the kale.